Leonard Hitz
M. Schroeder
English Comp.
Nov. 15, 2015
Unhealthy Food
Food is essential, we all need it but most of the food that is available today is unhealthy because of modern food processing practices used by the food industry and it is creating wide spread heath issues.
1. Modern Processing
A. Mechanical
B. Chemical
2. Food distribution
A. Benefits
B. Draw backs
3. Additives
A. Sugars, sweeteners, ect.
B. Artificial ingredients
4. Health effects
A. Nutrition
B. Obesity, diabetes
5. Avoiding health problems via diet
A. Know what you eat
B. Know what you are buying
Really nice and organized. Cant wait to see what you have to say.
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have a good organized outline which will lead to good points in your essay. Even just looking at your points/word choice are making me think twice about what I eat. haha. Hopefully I'll get to read the finished product.
ReplyDeleteIf I am reading your outline correctly, it reads more like you're informing me. Make sure you include the opposing arguments. Make sure that as you write, you argue that our diets depend on less processed foods, in order to live long, substantial lives. Can't wait to read your research in regards to this.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your outline. I am looking forward to reading your article!
ReplyDeleteGreat topic Leonard! I look forward to reading your essay. Your outline covers a great deal; sounds like an educational experience. Something we all need in the food industry department! Good luck!
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